The dawn
A scarlet sea with hints of the colours of joy,
The clouds above begin to take life,
To sparkle and move in the multitude of shades.
The wind, cold and hot all at once, surrounds you,
Warmer than in a lover's embrace .
You know, you feel; it's the beginning,
A new day has come and with it
All the possibilities, all the opportunities
That may change your life forever.
As the sun rises, so does your spirit.
It's freedom at its purest for, it's
Hope that you feel when you stand
In front of the dawn.
How does your heart react?
How can your eyes stand such grace and beauty all at once?
You stand there, completely astonished, full of life
And it's the best feeling you're ever going to feel.
Vittoria Ribbeni
Viviana La Bella
4H LS BCroce Palermo
“The dawn” makes me feel good thank to words that are used by Viviana.
ReplyDeleteEspecially at this time that it’s very particular for us who feel sad because we must stay at home. It’s a time in which we’re bored, we practice the same activities, we play the same games every day. I’ve never lived such a bad and difficult time like this.
This is the reason why I smell the sea, I hear the sound of waves, I can imagine the sunny days, summer holidays where people laugh, we’re amuse, we dance all together, we hug each other, just reading this kind of poetry.
When she underlines “It’s freedom in its purest for. Hope that you feel when you stand in front of the dawn” makes me image how people feel when this situation will end: in my point of view they feel free and happy in front of the sea, the dawn, the sunset, or just in front of another people that they haven’t seen for a long time because of this time.
Giorgia Varvarotto
I chose to comment on this text because watching the sunrise is one of the things I like to do most. If I think back to all the times I watched a sunrise, beautiful memories come to my mind with my friends. I think waking up every day is a miracle, a gift they make us, and it is no coincidence that the beginning of the day is accompanied by something as sunreal and beautiful as sunrise. After reading this text, the first thing I will do with my friends after this bad period is over is to go watch the sunrise on the beach.
ReplyDeleteMATTIA MUCÈ IV H.
sunreal? you mean surreal
Deleteto go watch ? going to watch
When I read this poem I caught immediately the message that it wants to transmit to us . The text deal with the dawn, a wonderful phenomenon that we often underestimate but that is full of meaning and extremely "rare". My "rare" is not a question of frequency of this phenomenon, but I mean that life is extremely rare, it is a wonderful gift, so we have to accept all its shades, both positive and negative. Nature is obviously between the positive ones; it offers to us the great show of the Sunrise every day. It is the symbol of life, that every day smiles to us and allows to us new opportunities and possibility. In this difficult period we must be at home and I'm forgetting the good sensations that sunrises can make me feel, so probably I think the first thing I'm going to do at the ending of these months is admiring the Sunset'show.
ReplyDeleteMatteo Dragotto
Every dawn brings a new day with new hopes for a new beginning. Dawn brings with it the darkness of the night, and illuminates the morning. Dawn is a gift, I love to see its colors reflected in the sea, I love to feel its freshness on my skin and I love the warmth it gives off.Dawn makes me feel free, a new person, full of dreams and goals.
ReplyDeleteGioele Mucè 4H
DeleteWhen I read this text I immediately remembered the first time I saw the sunrise at the sea with my family on one night in August, a few years ago. This text made me feel nostalgic. Especially in this period I understood how important live full day after day. A new day gives us new opportunities and new memories. But a new day can also drastically change our habits how did it happen because of this virus that diffused rapitly. Nobody expected it.
ReplyDeleteGiorgia Grado 4H.
how important live ?? ...life is
ReplyDeletehow did it happen ??..it happened
diffused rapitly ?? spread rapidly